Looks pretty fun.
A couple nitpicks, the Moldy Crow Title may not pay off easily without recon specialist. that can save you 3 points.
Determination may not be too useful on an A-wing. With only 2 hull, the odds of it being useful are slim. If you've got a point leftover, though, why not, eh? Perhaps Veteran Instincts, if you care about pilot skill.
If you take those saved points, you can make the missile-toting bandit into Lieutenant Blount, guaranteeing you'll hit with the missiles, and you wouldn't need that Munitions Failsafe either. Not to mention, at PS2, a bandit with Assault may go down to focus fire before he can get his missile off!